My results for my writing test

Today I got my writing results and guess what?  My results where average from my opinion.  The things that I was good at where, ideas, structure, organisation, punctuation and spelling.  The things that I need to work more on is Vocabulary and sentences I think I low marks on sentences is probably because i try to make my sentences more descriptive but I can just make it simple and not making it boring and to just make it interesting.  Here take a look at my result that I have got given for my writing test.